What do you think of my plot?

I would really want to read this! Almost everyone I know that likes reading hates sad endings. So please don't make her die! Maybe have her try to kill herself but as she's about to she gets a phone call saying that her dad is going to live! And then as she's about to leave to the hospital she goes out the front door and finds ben coming u the driveway. Tammy still is dead but the rest of her life turns out a little bit better. Or maybe it was a dream that Tammy died too idk! Hope i helped!